tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444744875629312096.post3773593735763054017..comments2023-08-25T05:17:54.623-04:00Comments on New York Dixie: One Hit And QuitZara Kennedyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02761332048513303962noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444744875629312096.post-25410968284655745432014-02-09T13:00:14.378-05:002014-02-09T13:00:14.378-05:00This blog has a lot of potential. I like the idea....This blog has a lot of potential. I like the idea. That being said, the characters are really superficial. There's no real depth to any of them and I don't feel like I connect with them. In a story like this you want to LOVE the main character. Lynn is actually kind of annoying and I already find myself hoping she'll fail. Hoping this one gets better.... Shann Mackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18298125871118579218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444744875629312096.post-31877740185776855902013-11-26T08:27:28.531-05:002013-11-26T08:27:28.531-05:00yes i'm agree with sashay13 here. loving the w...yes i'm agree with sashay13 here. loving the writing so far, just a little suggestion for the blog layout. it's not a problem when i access your blog from mobile phone, but on pc or laptop it's a little tiring to read.<br />my suggestions are:<br />- agree with spaces between paragraphs <br />- agree with bigger fonts, and probably change the font type to sans-serif type like tahoma or helvetica and the likes<br />- reduce the main column's width to around 800-900 px, you can find the option on the templete designernathaniamandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14250804251890878167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444744875629312096.post-18837352030139323062013-11-22T15:07:37.946-05:002013-11-22T15:07:37.946-05:00Very entertaining blog. Can I make 1 suggestion t...Very entertaining blog. Can I make 1 suggestion though? It's a little hard to read your entries. Sometimes I look away from the screen for a second and it takes me a while to find where I left off. Maybe make the spaces between the paragraphs or lines spaced out more? Or maybe go with a bigger font. It'll definitely make reading your blog more enjoyable!Sashay13https://www.blogger.com/profile/01340651841549168445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4444744875629312096.post-16185100624196408132013-11-21T09:25:08.638-05:002013-11-21T09:25:08.638-05:00aww...I hope Adam is a nice guy...mumaww...I hope Adam is a nice guy...mummumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12692251485856666504noreply@blogger.com